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Helen Whelchel's avatar

IMO the duty of an artist is to make the reader (or viewer or listener) feel. Feel something. You accomplished this in so few words. Almost a poem. Well written and heartfelt. Thank you for lifting us with a beautiful story.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Your new grammar here, Jim, rings just right: "The water ran swift and smooth..." "The sun set quickly, surprising him cold." "....tears breaking childlike..". Grandpa is still in there and the child knows it. So very touching. You write with such sensitivity. ( For a grumpy old man.)

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