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Terry Freedman's avatar

I really liked the interposing of their conv6with the birds' actions. The lack of writing progress felt very uncomfortable: there but for the grace of God... I also liked the sense, to my mind, that a vast amount was NOT being said.

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Justin Deming's avatar

Really loved the story, Jim, especially the dialogue and descriptions. The balance is perfect. You have a way of grounding me in the scene. Excellent stuff!

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